Charlie II

My, what a great name we have for our group! :P ... Hi, I'm Charlie (as you might have worked out) and I have little self-motivation. Phew, it feels better ...

Well, there is this ... But, to be honest, it never really took off or worked in my experience. It shows there is definitely a market for what you are ...

Day 8. 8:50 am. Bernard. “Hey guys, need any help?” Dave got up and walked over to them, hands in his pockets. The remnants of tears lingered on his face, ...

And DING ! Necropolis has been posted in. I repeat: Necropolis has been posted in ! Come on guys, jump on the bandwagon until it breaks and Dono has to ...

Day 8. 7:00 am. Bernard. Bernard’s watch beeped. He woke up, and instantly regretted it. Trying to get to sleep in the cold was bad enough, but waking up in ...

... :shock: I'm appalled that this has been misunderstood by so many writers. ... Clearly this is a piece of symbolic writing. I'd love to show this to my English ...

Hi there! You've got an interesting beginning, but let's see what I can do with it: 1. Adjectives the young supple form Milky white thighs a plaid handkerchief Apart from ...

The Belated Crit! Grrr. You've got me stumped! It's going to be tricky finding much wrong with this piece; you've done a great job with it! 1. Onomatopoeia Ok, to ...

I personally think that storybooks could be made a little less open to the authors. My greatest fear, as a storybook writer, is to be confronted with a blank page ...

Happy Birthday ;) *hugs* Sleep well :) Charlie

I used to be "DarkLight" but now I am "Charlie II"! Well, yeah, apparently "Charlie" was already taken so I'll have to be the Charlie Mark II :P. Hope this ...

Day 1. 8:24pm. Bernard. "I'm Bernard," he said and extended his arm to Velna, "nice to meet you." She frowned at it curiously, as if she was looking for a ...

They weren't coming. If Egon had tear ducts he would have cried. He didn't, however, so he could not, but this changed nothing. He had been abandoned. "Disconnected..." The word ...

Ok, paragraph-by-paragraph critiquing: My current Red Notebook is blue. It sounds strange, yes, but there's reason to this madness, I swear. My last Red Notebook really was red, and since ...

Hey there, Derek. I've got a few points for you to consider: 1. Realism -- Odds against: One against over twenty? They are pretty bad odds for Vlora, but she ...